Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Other say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,it is supported that endangered species are an issue that concerns countless societies across the globe.Despite
this
,numerous others claim that there are more appalling environmental problems.In my belief, all living creatures on the planet play a significant role in the earth's ecosystem.
On the one hand,the extinction of our flora and fauna entails several damaging effects.Linking Words
Initially
, plants and animals are considered to be extremely important because without them our habitat will be completely destroyed.Linking Words
In other words
, it may Linking Words
harmly
lead to the catastrophe of our ecological system.Correct your spelling
hardly
For instance
, as Einstein once said " if bees stop existing, humans will have four years to live " since they contribute to pollinating 80% of the world's plants.Adding to Linking Words
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,there is ample evidence that today's individuals are the main enemy of animals Linking Words
as well as
of our forests,as we are the principal cause of their destruction.As an outcome, if these vital Linking Words
sources
extinct, people will too.
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On the other hand
, humanity has to deal with even more harmful conditions.First and foremost,Linking Words
along with
plenty of others, climate change has a grave impact on our daily Linking Words
life
.Fix the agreement mistake
lives
In addition
, deliberate activities Linking Words
such
as logging,dumping of waste,emissions and water contamination are harming our environment on a daily basis.To illustrate Linking Words
this
,our oxygen is depleted,our water is no longer drinkable and the lack of recycling begins to show its negative results.Linking Words
Therefore
,it is evident that everyone is being affected.
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To sum up
,by taking all the aforementioned arguments into deep consideration it is apparent that, our home suffers from pollution.I strongly believe that it's our duty to protect our paradise at all costs and most importantly the creatures that we share the earth with.Linking Words
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