Task 1 Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: -Where you live -The problem -What he should do

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am experiencing some inconveniences living in your apartment.

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I am living in one of your apartments which

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located on Telet Street, no 11.

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is a block of flats and there are five apartments on my floor. The problem is that some of my

next door

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neighbours constantly make a lot of loud noise. Sometimes, they listen to music till late

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night

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at night

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and they frequently organise parties with their friends.

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, they have a dog which can bark all

night

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. I want to tell you that I have 2 small kids and a good

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night

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sleep is very important for them. Plus I am an IT engineer so I normally work at

night

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on my computer and the noise disturbs me and leads to huge problems with

physical

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my physical

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health. I would be grateful if you could talk to the people living next to me in order to warn them that in case they do not stop making a lot of noise I would have to write an official complaint to the police. If you need any

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do not hesitate to contact me any time. You are invited to my place if you want to see what I am concerned about. Looking forward to your soonest reply and I hope you can do something to improve the situation. Yours sincerely, Vladimir SS

samedovateacherMon Jul 29 2024

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task achievement

For a higher score in task achievement, ensure that you clearly state what action you expect from the landlord, make it direct and specific to avoid any ambiguity.

coherence cohesion

To improve the logical structure, consider organizing your problems and solutions into separate paragraphs more distinctly. This would make the letter even clearer and easier to follow.

task achievement

The letter effectively covers all the required points: where you live, the problem, and what you expect the landlord to do.

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Good use of polite and formal language which is appropriate for this context.

coherence cohesion

The letter has clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point, which contributes to its readability.

coherence cohesion

Good use of introductory and concluding statements, which frame the letter well.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

238 words

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Task 1 Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: -Where you live -The problem -What he should do

Should hunting be considered a sport? Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

In many countries government are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money.

Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.