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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

#food #drink #products #level #sugars #health #people #sugar
Paula told me that Robert’s memory is Okay. His speech is Okay and clear. He is orientated to time, place and person. His mood is Okay. His sleep is Okay. He can follow simple
instruction
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 and can make
basic
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decision
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. His appetite is Okay and he is on
normal
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 diet. He can feed himself. He is compliant with medication. There is no evidence or report of side effects with medication. He needs
staff
 supervision and
prompt
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personal care. He is doubly continent and he self toilets. He does not request
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help when he is soiled or wet and
staff
 need to check the toilet when he goes to
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.
Staff
 need to anticipate his needs. He walks unaided. He sleeps on a normal divan bed. There is no sensor mat in place in his room. There is no report of
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 risk. He is at risk of
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 and deterioration of physical and mental health if
staff
 do not prompt him to look after himself. He is unable to cook or use kitchen appliances independently. He doesn’t ask to leave the care home. His temperature is checked on
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 basis.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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