Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in? Give reasons for your answer and invlude any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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with constant inventions, discoveries, and war within a group leaving a footprint or
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, that we can feel how tough
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would be? some
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to be living. I opine that
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current
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version to create the
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living in humankind.
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, there is
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drift in pursuit of conquering the world at the cost of several wars, building their own kingdom, having regular war
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made
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the remarkable monuments
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a mark of win.
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, they have experienced the
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fullest
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without the mercy
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laws as they were changed frequently. while,
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is more organized under
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certain restrictions and laws encouraging
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healthy environment
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each and every
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opportunities
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remarkable things so that
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can be remembered by the future generation.
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built
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now being preserved as the symbol of excellent art that cannot be
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even
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tried to.
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microsoft
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company was the miracle that initiated the computer era.
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people
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refer as
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masterpiece.
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technologies enable
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research more
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to discover the unknown and want to have deep study for application in the human
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as a beneficial and comfortable source. The renowned institutions are centres to find new technology to enhance the living way of
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, exploring the other planet
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it
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can nurture
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or not. open thoughts and ideas of
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have given
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the freedom
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to publish the evidence to dive back into
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, Albert Einstein
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published
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breakthroughs
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in various fields of science, with the help of that most
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the research scientists
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now have
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to know the new possibilities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • quality of life
  • technological innovations
  • information and knowledge
  • human rights
  • gender equality
  • social justice
  • economic development
  • globalization
  • standard of living
  • travel
  • experience different cultures
  • environmental awareness
  • conservation efforts
  • sustainable future
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