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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
people
 are easily discover about some new through internet or social media, which make them feel difficulty. Some
people
 might prefer to do familiar
things
, which make them feel comfort. Let us discuss both attitudes in below paragraph. Part of
people
 prefer to try new
things
 as they would like to explore what they like. During the pandemic, some countries still remain a strict restriction on travel, which make
people
 cannot have travel in overseas freely.
Such
 as: Hong Kong, China. In Hong Kong, staystation is started from the pandemic. Some teenagers plan to have different staystation which make them to keep explore and try something news even in the same location.
Thus
, staystation can give them an vancation feeling, which can make them relax and escape reality for a while.
People
 prefer to try new foods, which is the reason why their are varity type of resturants all over the world.
For example
: Thai, French resturant. Trying some news that can make
people
 feel they are doing something different that make their days have remarkable memories.
On the other hand
,
people
 might prefer keep doing
things
 that they are familiar with. Keep doing the same
things
, which can make
people
 feel relax after works. Going to the same resturant to have similiar foods that might feel comfort as it already created habit or daily routine.
Such
 as: My friend prefer to go to same hotel chain no matter in overseas or having celebration with family or important clients. Because they will never disappoint about the quality of services and foods. It is the reason why hotel will keep their quality of services and food in a standard to build up the loyal programme. In conculsion, there is no right or wrong to keep explore something news or doing the same
things
. In my opinion, I would prefer to keep explorement on new
things
 that lead me to keep explore my life have excitement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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