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Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness. Do you agree or disagree.

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Playing a critical role in people's future prospects, a good income has turned into an inseparable part of our life. The majority of folks believe that it can bring joy, confidence and so on,
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, others including me, have their own radices which indicate that currency is not everything. In the following essay, both views will be elaborated on. Indeed, it is universally accepted that being affluent means being lucky and not only could lack deposit bring several major troubles but
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 it would shrink an individual self-confidence. I mean many people are of the opinion that education, happiness, travelling and overall a standard lifestyle originate from a good source of revenue. So, the more money one has, the more delightful would be, as it has become a kind of versatile in everyones' lives.
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, I should mention that these kinds of publics could not imagine their existence without fee as they think it would grant them a fortune. On the other side of the coin, some folks,
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 as me, do believe that fee does not mean everything. You know, from my point of view, we can not buy some things like health as well as satisfaction via currency. To explain more, I have seen many rich individuals who had severe diseases, though, their deposits could not rescue them.
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, euphoria and being satisfied with every aspect of daily living are accessible neither via money nor other inducements. I must say that these feelings come from one's heart and mind. Having tranquillity and being convenient are the most worthless issues in the world. To recap the main points from what was mentioned before, it can be concluded that an average amount of money could be really helpful.
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, being well-to-do and
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 poverty would not guarantee one's joyfulness and luckiness throughout life.
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