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Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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Many are of the belief that, finding a piece of knowledge about a
culture
 is related to their
language
 and if we want to know new
culture
 have to learn their
language
. While others disagree with
this
 sentence. In
this
 essay, I will discuss
this
 idea
then
 followed by reasons from my point of view.
Language
 is the
first
 difference between countries as well as
cultures
 .
Also
, it is the
first
 and easiest tool for creating relationships between folk. So, it seems the same
language
 as a bridge can connect various
cultures
 and various
people
 together. Human beings always like to explore all of the worlds and gain new as well as strange data about the world, from Christie Colomp who explored the world and discovered a new continent to today's
people
 that explore the
internet
 and study different
people
 and
cultures
. Nowadays, due to the development of societies and becoming equipped with the
internet
, a person who likes to know about other
cultures
 is enough that surf the
internet
 even in her or his own
language
. so, having a piece of knowledge of that
language
 is not necessary. While, in the past, if a person tends to learn about a new
culture
 have to learn that
language
 and
also
 should travel there. In conclusion,
although
 have enough knowledge about especially
culture
 need to know its
language
, but, today enthusiasts can search on the
internet
 or even connect by online tools he
such
 as what's up with other
people
 without knowing their
language
.
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