In the past,when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays,they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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beautiful Word of possibilities and opportunities in almost everything including study processes. Thanks to them you can get education and knowledge studying abroad but as always
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possibility has pros and cons.
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studying abroad have been well known for a long time.
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valuable certificate which will allow you to hire at vastly bigger amounts of jobs. Working with the newest equipment and tools because European and American universities have more financing and can buy expensive features for their work.
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one of the most weighty pros is modern branches of education.
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I’m planning to
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in an artificial intelligence major which is very new even for
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IT world which causes it
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pretty hard to find anything related to
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theme in my motherland country’s universities. At the same
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you need to know about
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problems when studying abroad. The most
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problem is the high cost of
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fees.
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only one semester can cost about 5 thousand dollars in European colleges while top tier academies like MIT or Harvard cost 20
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for a semester which is an impressive amount of money.
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one of the
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is that
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even if you have
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you still need to pass through enrollment with an intense contest and it’s very hard too. To summarize, studying abroad is a risky move but it will pay off in the future. If you are ready to face a lot of
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obstacles and difficulties, have enough money or any educational grants and know the English language well, feel free to try.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International job market
  • Cultural exposure
  • Intercultural communication
  • Higher education standards
  • Specialized programs
  • Language proficiency
  • Financial burden
  • Homesickness
  • Mental health challenges
  • Recognition of qualifications
  • Bureaucratic challenges
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