In the past,when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays,they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Nowadays we live in
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Advantages
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The advantages
for
studying abroad have been well known for a long time. Change preposition
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High
valuable certificate which will allow you to hire at vastly bigger amounts of jobs. Working with the newest equipment and tools because European and American universities have more financing and can buy expensive features for their work. Add an article
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in an artificial intelligence major which is very new even for Change the spelling
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pretty hard to find anything related to Change the verb form
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theme in my motherland country’s universities.
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problems when studying abroad. The most Replace the word
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well known
problem is the high cost of Add a hyphen
well-known
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universities
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only one semester can cost about 5 thousand dollars in European colleges while top tier academies like MIT or Harvard cost 20 Add a comma
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you still need to pass through enrollment with an intense contest and it’s very hard too.
To summarize, studying abroad is a risky move but it will pay off in the future. If you are ready to face a lot of Add an article
the money
unexpectable
obstacles and difficulties, have enough money or any educational grants and know the English language well, feel free to try.Replace the word
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...