Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Crime rates are increasing in most countries around the world, especially among the youth. While there seem to be two major contributing factors to
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issue, there are possible remedies that might help.
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