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Some people feel that fashion is like art and a significant part of society, while others feel that fashion is a waste of time and money.

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There is an opinion that
fashion
 is as crucial as
art
 to the community. Some
people
 believe that it is an effective investment. While others argue that it is a waste. Personally, I support the former opinion as these two industries are mingled together
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 But not everyone agreed with it because
this
 industry is useless and required huge affords. I have some thoughts about it below. A lot of
people
 associate
fashion
 with
the
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fashion
 weeks which demonstrates expensive clothing, which ordinary
people
 with a middle salary can’t afford. Many times during watching a vogue show ask questions, who will wear it in real life? Looks like all costs to produce
this
 useless close, from the practical point of view, were wasting time and money. But these cons don’t wrong to consider the trend in the
art
 role and even vice verse that supports to make connections between these industries. Unfortunately, I can’t give particular examples of mode or a piece of
art
, because I’m strong neither in
fashion
 nor in
art
, but I have enough obvious arguments which not require any examples and confirm that
fashion
 is
art
. If we start to compare being stylish and
art
 in price policy, we will find as expensive as cheap items in both directions. It is possible to watch an
art
 item and miss understanding what is going on in the exposition,
this
 is the same feeling as watching a fancy dress which is not suitable for neither office
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 nor party. So, all these things mean that
fashion
 is one of the directions of creative activity
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 because it’s an extraordinary thing that cheers us up and inspires us without practical use. In my opinion,
fashion
 has a huge influence on society, like any type of
art
 it inspires
people
 to make something new. Not every
fashion
 designer makes dresses for
the
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fashion
 shows, but they are
inspiring
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 by them and produce beautiful and comfortable clothes for real life. example?
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-expression
  • cultural heritage
  • global economy
  • fast fashion
  • environmental harm
  • consumerism
  • innovation
  • trends
  • superficiality
  • cultural identity
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