Some people are happy to spend their whole life in the same area, others prefer to live in many different places in thair life time? Discuss both views & give your opinion

Lots of teenagers are likely to move out or go abroad when they grow up. Some people

are appreciate

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to live

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in the exact

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for

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while some prefer to live in various

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in their life. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail, before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, living in the same

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for their whole life will be a lot easier because we will know everything and

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will be the identical environment and

culture

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you rose up to.

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, If you are going to the mall, you will know where the thing is.

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, living

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in the

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exact

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could make them

having

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a strong relationship with their neighbour.

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town

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there

are

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the

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traditional

culture

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that you can attempt

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.

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as, in my hometown every year we usually meet and greet the whole village and make merit together.

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,

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people happy to spend their lifetime

on

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in

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the same

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.

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site

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can help to learn

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about new

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culture

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cultures

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and

experience

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experiences

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. In the world, there are many cultures.

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as

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the roman civilization and the greek

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. While some people may not know but if you

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to new

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and learn about it, you will face

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the new experience and knowledge.

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, moving to

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new city there

are

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some

disadvantage

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.

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, living in

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different

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you have to adapt

into

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the new town and

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a new

friendship

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friendships

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. Or in case

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you having the trouble, it would be a little bit problem

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you. In conclusion, whether you are living in the same

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or moving to

different

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, they are all advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, I would like to live in the external

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due to the cultures and experience.