Some people are happy to spend their whole life in the same area, others prefer to live in many different places in thair life time? Discuss both views & give your opinion

Lots of teenagers are likely to move out or go abroad when they grow up. Some people
are appreciate
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to live
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living
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in the exact
area
for
lives
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their lives
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while some prefer to live in various
places
in their life. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail, before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, living in the same
places
for their whole life will be a lot easier because we will know everything and
this
will be the identical environment and
culture
you rose up to.
For instance
, If you are going to the mall, you will know where the thing is.
In addition
, living
the
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exact
area
could make them
having
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a strong relationship with their neighbour.
For example
, In every
town
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,town
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there
are
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the
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traditional
culture
that you can attempt
to
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.
Such
as, in my hometown every year we usually meet and greet the whole village and make merit together.
Hence
,
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makes
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make
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people happy to spend their lifetime
on
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in
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the same
area
.
On the other hand
, Moving to numerous
site
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sites
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can help to learn
new
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about new
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culture
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cultures
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and
experience
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experiences
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. In the world, there are many cultures.
such
as
,
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the roman civilization and the greek
culture
. While some people may not know but if you
moving
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to new
places
and learn about it, you will face
to
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the new experience and knowledge.
However
, moving to
the
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new city there
are
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some
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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.
for example
, living in
the
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a
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different
area
you have to adapt
into
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to
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the new town and
making
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make
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a new
friendship
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friendships
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. Or in case
If
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you having the trouble, it would be a little bit problem
to
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you. In conclusion, whether you are living in the same
area
or moving to
different
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a different
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area
, they are all advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, I would like to live in the external
places
due to the cultures and experience.
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