It's possible to read books on electronic devices called ebook readers. Are ebook readers the best way to read books or should people continue to read books in their paper form?200-220words

A lot of people nowadays prefer to use an electronic book
instead
of a
paper
book.
To begin
with,
ebooks
are portable and lightweight which makes them easy to carry around and offers a greater variety of things that you can read.
For
example
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a book can only hold a limited amount of stories while
ebooks
can hold more than a thousand
books
at once with the benefit of being able to read new stories with the click of a button
instead
of going to a library which has a limited amount of
books
. Internet space offers almost all
books
for download which can be accessed with an ebook everywhere with wifi and provides free
books
and are cheaper than
paper
books
because there isn't a manufacturer cost .
However
,
paper
books
are
eye friendly
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and offer a better reading experience because a lot of people enjoy the feeling of flipping through the pages which
ebooks
just can't offer. All in all the variety of
books
and the portability of
ebooks
offers a far greater benefit than
paper
books
which are harder to carry and can only hold a pretty limited amount of stories in them while being more expensive than their counterpart.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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