You wish to get enrolled in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but you haven’t received a reply yet. Write a letter to the college explaining your concern because the course will start in less than two months. You need to know if you can still get enrolled, and you also request more information about the course, including the cost.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Kajol Dave. I am writing

this

letter to express my concern about the CAD

course

information,

this

course

will begin in less than two months at an Australian college. I wrote to you letter two weeks ago but I have not received any reply yet. Would you please let me know if it is too late for me to get enrolled in the

course

? Please advise me If there are any seats available. I wish to

enroll

Change the spelling

enrol

show examples

this

course

if possible.

However

, I would like to have complete details about the

course

. Would you please inform me about the fee structure of the

course

, the date of beginning and its duration? Will the certificate you offer it will be helping me after the completion of the

course

? I would be appreciated it if you could send your response by email because I am out of the station. Yours faithfully, Kajol Dave

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