Some people believe that violent films are bad for you and encourage people to be violent. Others argue that violence and films are unrelated because violence existed before films. Which of these opinions do you agree with, and to what extent do you agree?

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Aggressive

movies

create notions in society.

However

, some other debates about crime and

films

are not connected. Criminal

activities

happened a long time ago when

movies

were not produced. I agree with the

first

statement that significantly crime rate increases after watching those types of

movies

Nevertheless

, we can overcome

this

issue by providing employment and requesting the

government

to ban

this

kind of

movie

from broadcast in society. I can explain those points with suitable examples in the following paragraph. Nowadays, many film producers are interested in violent

films

because the public is more affectionate toward action

films

However

, these

films

produce a terrible image in

people

's minds.

People

can find an easy way to learn how to do criminal

activities

. Sometimes, the mind becomes feistier because of constantly watching these

movies

. Recently one robbery attempts in India after watching the " Pushpa"

movie

This

movie

shows how to smuggle Chandan wood from South India worldwide.

Moreover

, one group can operate smuggling with a similar pattern to

this

movie

after some time.

On the other hand

people

have numerous ways to outcome with

this

problem. We have several possible solutions like providing employment to poor

people

and providing education to earn enough wages and fulfil their basic needs.

In addition

to that, we are requesting the

government

to stop permitting these kinds of

movies

For instance

, In Bihar, several criminal

activities

happen in local residential areas.

Nevertheless

, now drastically reducing these

activities

is because

people

are more educated, and the

government

helps them establish numerous industries in

this

area. To state it briefly, crime-related

movies

can encourage criminals to do these

activities

in societies. Meanwhile, the

government

should take necessary actions against producers and directors to make these types of

movies

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