You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room-mate.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Kajol Dave. I am writing to express my annoyance with the
room- mate
because of lots of noise, I will not be able to study.
She always has friends visiting and parties on the daily basis in the Correct your spelling
roommate
room
. They make lots of noise during the events and switch on the radio very loudly. This
environment is very difficult for me to study with concentration. She even takes my things without my permission and it is very impolite behavior
.
I had asked her to arrange parties in another place many times, but she still has arranged the parties in the Change the spelling
behaviour
room
. I really cannot stay in the same room
with her. I would be grateful if you could change my room
to a single room
so that I can study in a peaceful environment.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Kajol DaveSubmitted by Ishaan433 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite