The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets, some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing problems of public. To what extent you agree?

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Nowadays, governing bodies in many countries are using huge
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in search of life on other planets.
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, many believe that these government resources should be utilized for serving the needs of the people and I completely agree with
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notion. Many nations are spending huge funds
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the research of life on other planets. Despite
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their
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no
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result has been found till now.
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, countries like USA and China have launched many spaceships on Mars in hope that
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the survival of humans is possible even outside the earth.
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,
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is no progress and no one knows how much time it will take to know the facts. Henceforth, if
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money
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is spent on the public needs it would be definitely more fruitful.
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, there are
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of public problems which need to be addressed by the authorities
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as healthcare facilities, better transportation for the commuters and daily needs. One of the best examples of
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can be seen in Korea where the government has raised the public funding and is using
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for the construction of hospitals in the rural areas so that its residents can be benefitted. Henceforth, authorities should spend the resources on the essential things which are required for the prosperity of the country. To conclude, governing bodies should spend on the research work and discoveries but only
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those which have definite results and which are beneficial for
the nations growth
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the growth of the nation
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.
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, I completely support the fact that the government should use
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money
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for the enhancement of the basic amenities of the people.
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