The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets, some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing problems of public. To what extent you agree?
Nowadays, governing bodies in many countries are using huge
amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
money
in search of life on other planets. However
, many believe that these government resources should be utilized for serving the needs of the people and I completely agree with this
notion.
Many nations are spending huge funds for
the research of life on other planets. Despite Change preposition
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of
their Remove the preposition
apply
efforts
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,efforts
signifiant
result has been found till now. Correct your spelling
significant
For instance
, countries like USA and China have launched many spaceships on Mars in hope that if
the survival of humans is possible even outside the earth. Correct word choice
apply
However
, still
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,still
their
is no progress and no one knows how much time it will take to know the facts. Henceforth, if Replace the word
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this
money
is spent on the public needs it would be definitely more fruitful.
On the other hand
, there are lot
of public problems which need to be addressed by the authorities Change the article
a lot
such
as healthcare facilities, better transportation for the commuters and daily needs. One of the best examples of this
can be seen in Korea where the government has raised the public funding and is using this
money
for the construction of hospitals in the rural areas so that its residents can be benefitted. Henceforth, authorities should spend the resources on the essential things which are required for the prosperity of the country.
To conclude, governing bodies should spend on the research work and discoveries but only for
those which have definite results and which are beneficial for Change preposition
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the nations growth
. Change to a genitive case
the growth of the nation
the nation's growth
Therefore
, I completely support the fact that the government should use this
money
for the enhancement of the basic amenities of the people.Submitted by drvishal13 on
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