You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

Dear Joey, Hello, smarty! I hope you are fit and fine. I beg your pardon to disturb you in between your trip as I feel it is essential to tell you I inadvertently broke the

door

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of your store. In order to describe the incident that happened to me, it was

last

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Monday and Due to some storm, there was some fault in the electricity supply. After reading your instruction book, I tried to open the

door

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of the store on the

first

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floor for a tool kit.

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, the

door

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got stuck and when I pulled with a

lil

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force, it fell upon me. To be honest, I accidentally damaged the

door

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otherwise

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I had no intention to break anything.

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, to mend my mistake, I have talked to a carpenter

for

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apply

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the estimation

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the cost for the replacement of hinges and it was $40. I would like to suggest the carpenter's name and number which is

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John and 7822313225 and I am ready to pay the cost of repair. See you soon. With love, Harry

Mrjit147Sun Jun 05 2022

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