Some people think it is better to choose friend who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss bot these views and give your own opinion .

There are
two
different opinions
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related
to
friendship
. Some people believe that it is better t choose
friend
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friends
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who
have
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the same
idea
with
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as
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us. Others believe
that
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the
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oposite
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opposite
statement. I am in favour of
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statement.
Esspecially
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Especially
, when we are teenagers,
friends
are so important to us, almost beyond everything. After
become
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a
grown up
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, we would rather
to
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apply
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be selective
on
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about
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our
friends
. As mentioned before, there
are
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mainly
two
type
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types
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who like to have the
sae
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same
opinions with their
friends
and who
not
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do not
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.
Firstly
, I think, having
same
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the same
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opinions
with
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as
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your
friend
would be so boring. In the terms of
explore
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new
advanteru
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adventure
advantage
or keeping up
new
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with new
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trends will be the missing part of our
friendship
with
a
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the
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same
idea
friends
. I
also
assume that there will be nothing new between these
two
friends
who always
sharing
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the same
idea
from
same
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the same
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angle. As an example, having
a
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the
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same conversation
again and again
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, again and again,
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gives us
a
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idea
of being in
a
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endless loop which is not
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joyful
joyfull
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a joyfull
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thing to have.
However
, learning or seeing things from
different
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a different
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perspective would be so much easier with a
friend
who
is disagree
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disagrees
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with us.
This
disagreement between
two
people would be always helpful to evaluate our own
idea
and we will be able to take one more step to go in any
fields
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field
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with that evaluation, most of the time.
Thus
, these
friendship
puts so much on us in a good way. If we have a
friend
who has
disagrement
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disagreement
disagreed
with us, we should prefer to keep him/her as our
friends
. In terms of learning,being capable of
evaluate
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and spending
fullfill
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fulfil
time,
disagrement
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disagreement
in
friendship
would be worthy.
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  • reinforcement
  • conflict avoidance
  • emotional support
  • social activities
  • diverse perspectives
  • personal growth
  • challenging conversations
  • open-mindedness
  • critical thinking
  • negotiate
  • core values
  • healthy debate
  • enriching experiences
  • personal development
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