Some people think that economy progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors,do you think are most important?

Few individuals believe that financial growth is only the source to measure the development of any

country

,

however

other opine that there are other alternate factors which help to evaluate the success of a

country

. The advancement of technology is one of the major examples of

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public. In the following paragraph, we will discuss all the views of the essay.

To begin

with, there is a plethora

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factors

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which can be considered to measure the progress of any

country

.

Firstly

, many

community

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communities

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have all the modern technology which helps to prove the achievement rate of the

country

.

For example

, Russia has low currency as compared to many other

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regions

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region

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like the USA but at the same ,time it has all the advanced weapons. So on

this

base of ,

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the economy

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economy

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we can not assume the growth of any

provincial

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.

Secondly

, we should consider the

education

system of the provincial because nowadays

education

plays a vital role in the development of the

country

. If the province has a literate population, it becomes developed very fastly and a strong

education

system is a key factor for becoming successful.

Last

but not least, modern health amenities

also

should be assumed while considering the success comparision of any

country

because many

countries

have perfect health facilities as compared to the

countries

that are strong economically. In my view, the tourist attraction place is

also

very important for a

country

. Many

countries

in the globe have good tourist places due to these

community

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communities

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around the world

come

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to visit

these region

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which help to make a provincial financially strong and increase the employment rate,

consequently

, people learn different types of culture and traditions.

Moreover

, the criminal background environment is

also

very important to judge the rustic's fame. In recent years ,terror attacks are increases in a few developed

countries

due to

this

people feel unsafe visiting

these region

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and some

countries

are not enough economically strong but are safe to visit there so people prefer these

countries

instead

of having

a

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good

economies

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. To conclude, the success of any

country

can be assumed on the basis of different types of factors

such

advance

education

system and development in the technology sector.