Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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students must join university courses after their basic education;

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other groups believe that to support the community , people must develop their future in the construction field and automobile workshops.In my opinion, I affirm that the personal interest of an individual is the decision-maker of his future whether as a professional or a skilled worker.

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with, let us shed light on the viewpoint of the people supporting university studies.First and foremost, tertiary qualification is the stepping stone to professional life which is an inevitable part of a community.

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teachers, nurses and doctors are a key factor in the well-being of a population , where these people are developing their skills and knowledge from the colleges and universities.

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doctors worldwide have completed their graduation or post-graduation in Medical; science from recognised universities.

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, there are certain facts on the viewpoint of supporting skilled labouring as well.

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society are in the hands of these physically challenging workers.

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car mechanics and construction workers are establishing the basic needs of every community , where their importance in

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society must be appreciated

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, in China , during Covid 19, it was the building labourers who

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helped the Government to construct a Hospital within a few days of an emergency, which was valued and will be remembered until the end.

To conclude

, the services of professional and skilled labour and equally important to the advancement of a population. In my opinion,

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a university education is significant, the individuals who are interested

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as a mechanic or building labourers must be encouraged.