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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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 to cover where it becomes famous as a
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energy
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energy
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energy
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 and demerits of solar
energy
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kind of pollution
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 in sunlight
source
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 of
energy
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explain
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, solar
energy
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energy
.
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source
 which it's producing a lot of waste material like small
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are
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 of solar glass should
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 in intervals of time to convert more
energy
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propare
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propane
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other
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source
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cheapes
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cheaper
cheapest
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. It makes confusion to take. In conclusion,
they
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seems
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 to me that
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we
gain
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 more than we lose from
this
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of
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od
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energy
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rural
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energy
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 of regions.
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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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