Medical facilities should not be provided for free regardless of income. Do you agree with this opinion.
Nowadays, Inflation makes everything more expensive than in the past. Some notions say that medical facilities should not be provided for free regardless of income. In my opinion, I could not agree more with
this
notion and I will explain my opinion in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, Some people
feel that it is the duty of states to make citizens healthy and have the right to cure when illness. In some countries such
as Thailand, It was written in a constitutional act of Thailand. Moreover
, People
in today's competitive work and gain a lot of money
. Accordingly
, They do have not enough time to take care of their bodies.
On the other hand
, Some people
feel that providing medical facilities is not free but makes cheaper prices because when they are free. More people
are not intended to participate. For example
, The public park for exercise
should pay in cheap money
. After that, People
will feel that money
are
valuable and hard to collect. So, When they Correct subject-verb agreement
is
use
to maintaining healthy bodies, They should Wrong verb form
are used
be doing
Verb problem
apply
exercise
a lot in order to be suitable for the money
that they paid
. In my lifestyle, when playing Wrong verb form
pay
fitness free
in my condominium, I do Add a hyphen
fitness-free
exercise
in fewer minutes. However
, I can be doing
Wrong verb form
do
exercise
for an estimated one hour when paid 40 bahts
in a Fitness gym near my home.
In conclusion, I think medical facilities should be provided cheaply Correct your spelling
baths
paid
to reduce the expenses of citizens and motivate citizens to maintain Verb problem
apply
health
.Correct pronoun usage
their health
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