Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve the problem?

Plastic
materials
such
as bottles,
bags
and packages are detrimental
for
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the planet. The damage that
this
will make to the environment is
waste
piling
at
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deep oceans and
most
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viable solution is to ban all
plastics
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materials
from daily usage. The principal problem associated with the use of
plastic
creates
massive
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disposal of non-used
materials
discarded
to
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seabeds.
This
may affect the life of aquatic creatures and other mammals unable to survive in the
contaiminated
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contaminated
water.
Furthermore
, the non-
segeration
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separation
segregation
generation
of
waste
products at the origin itself pollutes the air which makes the
atmosphere
unable to breathe for human beings.
For instance
, in
India
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13000 tonnes of
plastic
waste
is getting disposed
to
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sea channels through which the water
getting
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highly poisoned and
affect
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the CO2 level in
atmosphere
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. The preferable solution is to have
complete
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ban
of
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plastic
usuage
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usage
at
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the earth to avoid any
further
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harm
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arm
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harm
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to the environment. The main responsibility lies with the government officials to give an alternative polythene recycling
bags
,
bottles
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and bottles
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for daily usage in the absence of plastics.
This
way, every individual can make sure that the living environment is free from any
contamination
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substances in the
atmosphere
.
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Fro
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example, in India,
since
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2018 government banned the usage of all the
plastic
materials
and provided
with
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paper
bags
for
usuage
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usage
which make every individual
to
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follow the rule with less impact
to
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the
atmosphere
. To conclude, the earth with increased
usuage
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usage
of
plastic
substances is highly harmful. The main problem that
this
may make is getting sea filled with
waste
products and the preferable solution is to avoid all using of
materials
made from plastics with another suitable type of
bags
in the market.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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