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Discuss the advantages and the disdavantages of study abroad

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In recent years,
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 moving overseas is common .A high percentage of
students
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 after their higher secondary prefer to go abroad.The reason is the high facility of learning methods in foreign countries.I believed that these changes have pros and cons.
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 essay will discuss the positives and negatives of
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 movement. Let's commence with the positive parts when the
students
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 go for their higher studies in the other countries they have to gain the new cultures and they will be strong to do things independently. If the
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 start to study there ,They automatically learn new thoughts , cultures and how to behave within the group and so on.
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, they learn new languages ,Learning new languages definitely helps in future and
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 they will be strong to face any difficult situations nicely and alonely.
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,One of my friend's 'sons went to the UK for his graduation.At that time he knows only one language.The
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 time he separated from his family. After his ,graduation he learned two or three languages fluently.
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 studying abroad has advantages
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, those have some challenges
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, As we know that, in any new place,at the
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 time we are little babies.we don't know which one is right or wrong. If we selected the wrong way,
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 we will lose everything. Fraud
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 misuse
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's life badly.
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,The rate of the chance of falling into the wrong path is high .So be careful to choose things properly and wisely.
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, They don't give any scholarships to other
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,Because ,that we have complete responsibility for the expenses.
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,As we know ,If any student goes for higher studies, they take loans from the bank. Sometimes we cannot afford too many expenses. To conclude, the Majority of
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's ambition is to study other countries. But it has chances and challenges.The Merits are that they learn about new cultures and study stand-alone and
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 overcome the challenges too.
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