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Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that university
students
 should pay all the cost of studies because university
education
 only benefits the
students
 themselves not the society as a whole. In the following paragraph, I will explain a reason why I disagree with
this
 notion.
Firstly
, Some countries complete
education
 welfare from primary school to university.
This
 policy was acted in constitutional act to preserve that all citizens have the right to
education
. Even in real life,
Government
 can collect a few tuition fees from
students
 but it is reasonable prices.
Secondly
,
Education
 make benefits the whole society.
For example
, If a child was born into a poor family.
However
, He
/
She wishes to be a doctor but his
/
her parents do not have enough money to reach his
/
her success.
Moreover
, He
/
She is a clever child that can make economic value and develop medical technology in the future. Children will feel sorrow even if they have talent and patience but do not have financial
support
.
Moreover
, Not only children will be unsuccessful but
also
 society will lose high-quality
labor
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. So, It is significant to
support
 financial to
students
.
However
, States must use all budgets suitable and efficiently.
Accordingly
,
Government
 can focus on only
students
 from low-income family because if the
government
support
 all student maybe the
government
 cannot spend money for investment in another project. In conclusion, I think
support
 financial for the poor
students
 is a necessary policy for all governments
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