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It's possible to read books on electronic devices called ebook readers. Are ebook readers the best way to read books or should people continue to read books in their paper form?

#books #devices #ebook #readers #people #paper #form
Are
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 readers the best way to read
books
 or should
people
 continue to read
books
 in their paper form? These days more and more
people
 buy and use ebooks and
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 their life easier. In my opinion,
ebook
 readers are something
that is
 going to have far more impact in the future and
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 the paper
books
 behind.
To begin
 with, ebooks are far more portable than
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ordinary
books
.
For example
, when travelling
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the
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public transport or any other type of transport,
people
 don't have to wonder where to put their
ebook
 because it can fit anywhere, even in their pocket.
As a result
, no one would need extra bags just for their book and they would
also
 spare some money.
Moreover
,
ebook
 readers are way easier to read than
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paper
books
.
For instance
,
people
 don't need to remember the page when they decide to stop reading.
This
 way, they won't get confused while looking for the right page.
On the other hand
, it is not exactly healthy to read an
ebook
.
For instance
,
people
 reading more often will eventually need glasses in order to be able not only to read
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 but
also
 to see clearly.
Consequently
, the majority of health issues will be connected with eye problems. All things considered, ebooks are definitely the better option compared with
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ordinary book. And I think that they are
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 to become something
that is
 daily used in our lives.
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