IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3.5

It's possible to read books on electronic devices called ebook readers. Are ebook readers the best way to read books or should people continue to read books in their paper form?

#books #devices #ebook #readers #people #paper #form
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Are
e book
Add a hyphen
e-book
show examples
 readers the best way to read
books
Use synonyms
 or should
people
Use synonyms
 continue to read
books
Use synonyms
 in their paper form? These days more and more
people
Use synonyms
 buy and use ebooks and
making
Wrong verb form
make
show examples
 their life easier. In my opinion,
ebook
Use synonyms
 readers are something
that is
Linking Words
 going to have far more impact in the future and
putting
Wrong verb form
put
show examples
 the paper
books
Use synonyms
 behind.
To begin
Linking Words
 with, ebooks are far more portable than
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
ordinary
books
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
, when travelling
with
Change preposition
on
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
public transport or any other type of transport,
people
Use synonyms
 don't have to wonder where to put their
ebook
Use synonyms
 because it can fit anywhere, even in their pocket.
As a result
Linking Words
, no one would need extra bags just for their book and they would
also
Linking Words
 spare some money.
Moreover
Linking Words
,
ebook
Use synonyms
 readers are way easier to read than
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
paper
books
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
,
people
Use synonyms
 don't need to remember the page when they decide to stop reading.
This
Linking Words
 way, they won't get confused while looking for the right page.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, it is not exactly healthy to read an
ebook
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
,
people
Use synonyms
 reading more often will eventually need glasses in order to be able not only to read
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 but
also
Linking Words
 to see clearly.
Consequently
Linking Words
, the majority of health issues will be connected with eye problems. All things considered, ebooks are definitely the better option compared with
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
ordinary book. And I think that they are
Linking Words
first
Correct article usage
the first
show examples
 to become something
that is
Linking Words
 daily used in our lives.
Submitted by taniadim74 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: