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Some people think that secondary school should add international news as a subject; others think that it is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views.

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Despite some people believing that high schools need to include global
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 as a
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 in their curriculum, other folks don't believe that
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 an approach can benefit the pupils. Both sides have pros and cons.
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 with, nowadays globalization is making the world smaller and information flows all over the planet.
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, we all need to filter the
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 to differentiate the fake ones from the real ones, but most importantly to invest our time more wisely in what to read and what we can skip.
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, high schools could start to engage with
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 to teach them how to be involved in global changes every day and particularly to be able to sort out the everyday
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 quality-wise.
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, it is clear why other parts of the society think that
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 in secondary schools might waste their time understanding specifics of international
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, as it is still early to get them educated in
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 difficult
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.
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, international
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 is a complex
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 one needs really focus on, so it's better to do at universities with relevant study direction.
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, it's better to focus on the digital-related subjects for
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 which can benefit them in a higher amount and prepare them for their future life adventures. To sum up, both opinions have full right to coexist in the world, but as the whole educational system is being developed over years it is more likely that we can see international
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 as a separate
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 for
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 in the secondary academies.
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