Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is becoming interestingly common that most companies have desired to use advertising for presenting their
products
.Some people believe that
this
method is not really interested
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customers. In
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essay, both views will
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. The proponent of
this
trend
believe
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that one of the significant ways to persuade
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the consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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to buy
products
is
applying
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by applying
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advertising
in
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different social media .
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pattern
offer
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assistance to individuals to evaluate them and gather information concerning certain
products
.The clearest evidence for
this
can be seen in
Nike
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brand by presenting their shoes
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world
champion
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on
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a billboard
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billboard
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and
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young
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generation to recognize their need and satisfy their need
via
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purchasing shoes. Marketing offer novelty benefits
such
as
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infrastructure for
target
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the target
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group to judge the price and enjoy the competitive price between competitors and meet their need by selecting reasonable one.
Although
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pattern must be several benefits, some critics of them have practical reasons for
convincing
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the convincing
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individual
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individuals
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about the old fashioned
of
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advertising. From
psychology
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behavior
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, a vast majority of them use tricky
and
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slogan
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in changing customer
behavior
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reading buying
products
, In
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most of them have poor
in
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quality. According to CNN the percentage of advertising
in
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TV
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sharply from 2010 until now. They suggest that if people do the
specialize
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research about their
need
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via different social media ,
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they can
capable
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buy practical
products
. In conclusion, because of technology and
internet
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, people have
opportunity
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the opportunity
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for investigating and collecting relevant data about their needs .
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marketing is less prominent in
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century.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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