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plastic products should be recycled? do you agree or disagree?

#plastic #products
The diagram shows the process of
plastic
 bottles recycling . At
first
 glance, it can be understood that
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 the diagram has 9 stages, starting with dropping
plastic
 bottles in a recycle bin.
Firstly
, by dumping
plastic
 bottles in the right bin, the recycling organisation will collect them. After they bring them into a recycling centre, workers of the recycling centre will divide them for better usage . After that, the workers compress them into blocks. Once they shape the plastics into a square block, they are crushed into small pieces and washed.
Next
, a machine produces
plastic
 pellets and in the following process, they will be roasted to be formed as raw material . In the final stages, after they made raw materials from
plastic
 pellets, that raw materials will be used in new
plastic
-made products. After they recycle those
plastic
-made products,
this
 cycle repeats forever.
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