Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In today's world in the light of statistics due to technological developments owning smartphones or tablet devices rates have reached high levels. By the same token people can easily connect to their social media accounts named Facebook or Twitter. Namely many consider

this

type of communication not only entertaining but

also

useful while building new relationships. All the same many believe that negative impacts have a strong influence.

Firstly

, young people are almost addicted to using social media platforms. They are spending a lot of time text messages to each other and surfing applications in which the public share photos, videos or news

such

as Instagram, and Twitter. These sites allow us to create friendships or contact with elder friends, and relatives

Nevertheless

it shouldn't be replaced with traditional face to face interaction. How it witnessed by employers youths who grew up with social media might have some difficulties in business life owing to their habits as utilizing short texting with weak vocabulary. Inasmuch as they will have to attend meetings that have to verbalize their thoughts or plans, notably write comprehensive emails. On the other, hand

this

artificial world provides the opportunity to explore different lifestyles, to get news from all around the world, borderless friendships and a chance for networking.

For example

, even if someone lives in a small, undeveloped place but has internet access and a device to connect to, have an opportunity to get all kinds of information.

Hence

its' cons

this

unlimited access could be the best benefit of these sites to bring people together .

As a result

in the present day fiddling away on these platforms is an unchangeable fact and becomes some positive and negative effects. In other, words the best proper way is to let raising teenagers' awareness about potential harm while they spend time in

this

online life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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