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Nowadays most people read digital books than conventional books. Do you agree or disagree

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Education systems try to improve learning media and
books
 is the important for start to learning. Nowadays most people read digital
books
 more than conventional
books
. In my opinion, I did not agree with
this
 notion and I will explain my reason in the following paragraph. On the one hand, Even digital
books
 or e-
books
 have benefits because all peoples have smartphones or iPad that can be reading an e-book.
Moreover
, Electronic
books
 have comfortable because we do not take a heavy book to go to school or
workplace
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.
In addition
, Electronic
books
 are easy to allocate
students
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 in poor families by the government supports one tablet and capacity book files inside a tablet per student. It bargains a lot of budgets.
On the other hand
, I found that peoples prefer reading conventional
books
 more than electronic
books
.
Firstly
, People are concentrated on the Thailand book fair that has events every year in March and October.
Secondly
, Having authors sign in conventional
books
 is still a superb experience for all readers. I
also
 collect an author's sign in my
favorite
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 history
books
.
Thirdly
, spending too much time in front of computers and smartphones all day has a bad effect on the eyes and raises back problems as well, which can be curbed by limiting their use.
Lastly
, I agree that digital writings provide us
ease
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 to get ourselves able of gaining a good insight
of
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into
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 almost anything we want
to
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apply
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. The Conventional text has its own predominance as it reveals our antiquity.
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