Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
In the modern
lifestyle
Add a comma
,lifestyle
people
do a variety of things
to be happy. Almost everything in the present world is based on money
transactions and some people
feel happy when they are only wealthy. Nevertheless
, some other section
of Fix the agreement mistake
sections
the
society Correct article usage
apply
believe
that they can be happy without Change the verb form
believes
money
such
as having good friends or living a calm life. This
will depend on a person’s thinking and mind set
and the following essay will briefly discuss Correct your spelling
mindset
on
the above.
In the present world context, everything is given a value and could be obtained through a transaction. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, people
try to do better jobs or enhance businesses and collect more wealth. Because, when they get a good income, it will assist them to purchase almost anything to their liking and capacity. For example
, a rich person such
as the film star Dwayne Johnson has one of the largest luxurious estates in America, whereas a poor farmer from a developing country will not have the money
even to buy a plot of land for cultivation. This
shows the buying power of money
and how it can make a person happy.
On the other hand
, some think that money
can not bring you total happiness. It is certain that things
like life, love and care, and mindfulness cannot be purchased. These type of things
has to come from a persons
mind and thinking pattern. Change noun form
person's
Additionally
, if a man dies even though how much money
is available for spending for
doctors there can be a possibility that person cannot come alive. Change preposition
on
Furthermore
, in Buddhism
there are many examples Add a comma
,Buddhism
how
rich Change preposition
of how
people
who had everything gave up and became a priest to obtain a better life. Therefore
, it shows that people
also
find happiness through other things
rather than wealth.
In conclusion, money
has the ability to purchase many things
and make people
happy but for other segment
of Change the wording
another segment
other segments
the
society, there might be Correct article usage
apply
other thing
that makes them happy. Change the wording
another thing
other things
Therefore
, it depends on the persons thinking pattern on what will make them happy.Submitted by rashikag2000 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.