In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is undeniable that as the technology has developed more and more over years,

people

can now read ebooks and news online

free

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however

, it does not mean every

books

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and

newspaper

will be free, there will be reasonable subscription fees and

price

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prices

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for both of them.

Although

I am

conviced

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convinced

convicted

that majority of the

people

even nowadays have a tendency to read almost

everytime

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online, I

compelety

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completely

disagree with the argument that nobody will pay for printed

newspaper

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newspapers

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and

books

in the future and explain the reasons

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this

phenomenon in

this

essay.

First

of all, almost everybody in

this

contemporary world

have

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laptops or tablets or at least phones in their hands and because of

that

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it is

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easier to

accessible

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to news worldwide in a matter of split seconds.

Therefore

printed

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newspaper

has become outdated compared to the online news but rumours and false information can be easily

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spread

spreaded

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spread

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through online and that's why accuracy has played

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the

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integral role in the printed

newspaper

this

session. In some schools, children do not need to bring

books

anymore due to the fact that carrying

large

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number of

books

can cause damage

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their shoulders and they only need to bring a laptop or tablet to save lessons and type assignments in those of them. Despite the aforementioned reasons

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using printed

books

lesser and lesser, it seems like physical

books

will die out in the future,

however

, it is not

ture

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true

sure

that there are still

people

who enjoy the feeling of flipping pages of real

books

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newspapers

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rather than looking at the lighted screen.

Also

, it will damage your eyes if you watch too long or too often

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the phone screens or tablet screens due to the fact that they emit blue light that can harm your eyes in long term.

Furthermore

, old

people

don't like reading online as they might be really don't understand

about

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the modern technology or they might find

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inconvenient

inconvient

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to read from

tables

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tablets

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or phones and still

buying

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physical

newspaper

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newspapers

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books

. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that it is undeniable that

although

printed

books

and

newspaper

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newspapers

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will be used less compared to the past time, there will be always some

people

left who like physical

books

rather than virtual ones.

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