The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some individuals, because of advanced technologies, the offences rate has decreased dramatically. I completely agree that the neighbourhood became a safer place nowadays.

Firstly

, the invention of the digital lock at

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doors increased security

at

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the cities for the reason that only owners of a house can open their main door. To explain,

first

,

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should be saved in the device which is attached to a door.

Then

only when

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that specific fingerprint

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the device's screen, the door will unlock and open.

This

, in turn, made it difficult to break into the houses and commit crimes

such

as

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robbery

.

Moreover

, all roads of a city are under observation of higher authorities for 24 hours/7 days because of cameras installed

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out the streets.

For example

, China's government had installed CCTV all over the country since 1980 to catch criminals easily.

Hence

, recognition of

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officers

offences

offenders

faces and

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steps of a crime more efficiently.

Finally

,

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the detection

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of criminals in

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period of time because of technology. In fact,

this

can be done with the help of

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data that

saved

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in

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on

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police's

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computers. All information

is usually connected

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togather

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together

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from

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the fingerprint

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with all personal data up to the address.

Consequently

, the

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of a mysterious crime like murder and catch its

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culprit

culvert

fast. To conclude, in

this

contemporary world, technology helped to decrease the crime rate effectively. I totally believe that the fear is less these days out in the streets thanks to technology and advanced machines that improved our life.