Your friend has been offered a place on a cource at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an letter to your friend Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university Recommend the best way to for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

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Dear Avi, I am delighted to hear that you have secured a position for an Ergonomics course at my university. I will be glad to help you find accommodation. I stayed in a shared apartment with basic necessities.In fact, I found a spacious place at a cheaper rate for me to save money for a rainy day,

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it was far off from the university. You could easily browse websites like rent me or place locator to get the best match as per your requirements.

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, you can avail exclusive discounts and see virtual videos to experience vicarious views of walking through the rooms on

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, based on my experience, I would highly recommend renting a place which is in close proximity to your college because you may save on time to complete umpteen assignments given by the professors.

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, select a flat with well-equipped appliances. Let me know if you need any

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assistance. Best wishes, Devika

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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