In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work, and accommodate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development.

In

technology

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era, it is possible to do

purchase

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purchases

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,

working

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work

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and accommodate online without

need

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to visit face to face the other ones. I think it is a positive development. In the following paragraphs, I shall divulge my opinion.

First

of all, it is obvious that thanks to the

internet

it is more convenient for people to do their

works

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work

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and

buying

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buy

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online.

That is

to say, doing many things which

is

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related

to

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out of your home is possible just by pressing some keys.

For example

, when someone wants to purchase a book, which is not available in their city, it is bought online without extra payment to go to

another cities

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.

Furthermore

, online

shoppings

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shopping

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make more opportunities for those who do not have enough money to rent a suitable place to

doing

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their job. By the

internet

, they just need to make

a

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business pages or websites and sell their goods.

Beside

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these, the

internet

not only

save

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time for spending with loved ones but

also

reduces the cost in many aspects.

Secondly

, even though, people's

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lives

life

lifes

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lives

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due to the

internet

is

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are

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easier than

the

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past,

but

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it has some difficulties.

For instance

, hackers can reach personal information that people have on their smartphones or laptops. So that, they are able to make problems for everyone. Bank accounts are

an

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apply

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obvious examples of

these private information

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which hackers can access

it

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.

Moreover

, doing

works

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work

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by

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on

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the

internet

often reduces body activities.The result of

this

is more physical and

consequently

mental diseases. Obesity,

in particular

, had increased in recent decades

that

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one of the reasons is doing many

works

online.

In other words

, the more time on the

internet

, the more physical illnesses. In conclusion,

although

doing

works

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work

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and buying things only is really convenient,

this

way of doing affairs has some negative impacts, yet the positive aspects are more than

negatives

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.