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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #bout #history #house #research
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Various
buildings
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 contain stories for curious
people
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. On
this
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 account, a plethora of
people
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have
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 a tendency to be aware of the
history
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 of their living place.
Fear
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 of
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gosts
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ghosts
costs
 and curiosity are the main reasons why
people
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 try to understand
about
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the
history
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of course
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 there are some ways through which they can gather
information
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 about the past
history
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 of their houses.
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 with,
fear
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 of
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gosts
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ghosts
guests
 is a conspicuous reason lead
people
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 to start searching
a bout
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about
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 past events.
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 is because
,
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some
people
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 have their own
believes
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beliefs
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for
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,for
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 instance, if they hear a strange voice late at night, they will be doubtful about the
existance
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existence
 of
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gosts
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ghosts
guests
. While some
people
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 might live in
a old houses
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an old house
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 alone, they feel more
fear
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 of even
amall
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small
 noises and
as a
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result
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,result
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 they go for searching about the past landlords of their home.
In addition
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, being curious is a crucial factor
why
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in why
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people
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 start finding
information
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 about
history
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. Needless to say that having
information
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 about the
architecture
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architectural
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history
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 or the concept design of the builder,
people
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 prefer to gather data rather than having no
information
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.
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, an owner of a magnificent edifice in a garden will be asked about the time when it was
erracted
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retracted
erected
enacted
 or the steps of design , so he would rather be informative
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,
so-called
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a so-called
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 person will become curious about the
history
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. Obviously, there are a plethora of ways to gain
information
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 about a house but two of them stand out .
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, asking neighbours living near that
buildings
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specially
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 elder ones as older
people
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 have been living for years in a place, so
they
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can be a perfect source of
information
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 to be asked. Another way is to search for building
history
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 in
municipality
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the municipality
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. To clarify, as
this
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 place is responsible for
buildings
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 in cities,
this
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 source is a reliable one to search.
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, an owner of an old house in Shiraz was from another city named Tabriz, so he was curious about the architect of his building, so by going to
municipality
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the municipality
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 he could understand
about
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the architect. To conclude, being curious as well as
fear
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 of
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gosts
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ghosts
guests
costs
are
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is
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 two reasons evoke
people
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 to search about their
buildings
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,
also
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 individuals can gain
information
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 by asking their neighbours or by going to
municipality
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the municipality
a municipality
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 in which numerous
information
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 can be gathered related to their houses.
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