At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.

Nowadays, it has been reformed the proportions of citizens in many countries in aspects of age. The diversity among aged and young

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higher. The issue is controversial and there are both positive and negative aspects. Personally, I support that the

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society,

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essay. On the one hand, a

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, which is generally consisted of young persons, spends

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amount of money

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retirement plans. More particular,

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after the age of 60 are forced to quit their jobs and live through receiving from the

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part of their

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income. As a consequence,

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has to be prepared to cover via an enormous budget the needs of elderly

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financial report of the Greek

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of Economics proving that 32% of the

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budget of the country is required for the pensioners.

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, a country with a plethora of young

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suffers from high unemployment. Indeed, young

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have to fend for themselves and apply for a job after their studies. Due to the high

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offer

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, there are limited opportunities and the

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of jobs are totally underpaid.

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Argetina

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Argentina

, which is the country with the highest percentage of youngsters in the world, the unemployment rate is about 36%, since young

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have to

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the retirement of elder employees in order to get an occupation. In conclusion,

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percentages of a population cannot be manipulated, I insist on the superiority of a community, which's majority is included

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youngsters.

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, the caring

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elderly

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has

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to be neglected in any case.

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, the

state

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should organise a systematic strategy in order

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citizen could be

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member of

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