In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work, and accommodate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development.

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In the technology era, it is possible to do purchases,
work
and accommodate online without the need to visit face to face the other ones. I think it is a positive development. In the following paragraphs, I shall divulge my opinion.
First
of all, it is obvious that thanks to the
internet
it is more convenient for people to do their
work
and buy online.
That is
to say, doing many things which are related apply out of your home is possible just by pressing some keys.
For example
, when someone wants to purchase a book, which is not available in their city, it is bought online without extra payment to go to other cities.
Furthermore
, online shopping make more opportunities for those who do not have enough money to rent a suitable place to do their job. By the
internet
, they just need to make business pages or websites and sell their goods.
Besidesthese
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Besides these
, the
internet
not only saves time for spending with loved ones but
also
reduces the cost in many aspects.
Secondly
, even though, people's life due to the
internet
is easier than past, it has some difficulties.
For instance
, hackers can reach personal information that people have on their smartphones or laptops. So that, they are able to make problems for everyone. Bank accounts are obvious examples of
this
private information which hackers can access apply.
Moreover
, doing
work
on the
internet
often reduces body activities.The result of
this
is more physical and
consequently
mental diseases. Obesity,
in particular
, had increased in recent decades, one of the reasons is doing many works online.
In other words
, the more time on the
internet
, the more physical illnesses. In conclusion,
although
doing
work
and buying things only is really convenient,
this
way of doing affairs has some negative impacts, yet the positive aspects are more than negative.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online shopping
  • remote work
  • virtual meetings
  • contactless transactions
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • efficiency
  • time-saving
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • social interaction
  • fraud
  • misuse
  • dependency
  • technology
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