Many species of animals all around the world are on the verge of extinction. Some say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the

last

century, many habitats are destroyed due to urbanization. Some environmental activists claim that policymakers should consider the extinction of

species

of

animals

as a topmost priority;

However

, In my perspective, governments should focus on the other major challenges of human beings

such

as human

health

and environmental pollution. On the one hand, one cannot deny that the extinction of

animals

is gradually

increased

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increasing

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due to deforestation and urbanization which may

lends

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lend

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to

destroy

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destroying

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entire

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the entire

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ecosytem

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ecosystem

ecosystems

. To explain

further

, every living

beings

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being

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in

this

world is an inter-dependent,

the

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and the

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depreciation of any

species

imbalance

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imbalanced

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the ecosystem which leads to greater consequences.

For example

,

carvniorous

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carnivorous

animals

depends

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on other

animals

for their food the deprecation of some

animals

leads to feeding

issues

for them.

Besides

balanced

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a balanced

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ecosytem

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ecosystem

,

undoutedly

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undoubtedly

, every

individuals

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individual

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is responsible to save

species

from risk.

On the other hand

,

Although

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apply

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saving some

animals

from

the

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apply

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extinction is required but might not be a priority when considering concerning

issues

like

health

and environmental

issues

. Across the

globe

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many citizens do not have an access to

multifacility

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multi facility

multi-facility

hospitals.

For instance

,

Many

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South African

countries

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country's

countries'

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citizens

has

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to cross their

nation

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national

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borders to get

a

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proper treatment, due to poverty, which cannot be possible for everyone.

In addition

to

health

, authorities and organizations must spend their funds to reduce pollution by investing

on

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in

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environmental conservation which indirectly contributes to

protect

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protecting

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and

preserve

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preserving

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natural habitats.

Finally

, to recapitulate, the destruction of rare

species

is

a

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apply

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one of the major

issues

to be addressed to keep

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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balanced and save them for

next

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the next

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generations.

Nevertheless

, when compared to other major

issues

, I strongly believe other major

issues

such

health

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as health

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and pollution take

a

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the

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topmost priority.