Many species of animals all around the world are on the verge of extinction. Some say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the
last
century, many habitats are destroyed due to urbanization. Some environmental activists claim that policymakers should consider the extinction of Linking Words
species
of Use synonyms
animals
as a topmost priority; Use synonyms
However
, In my perspective, governments should focus on the other major challenges of human beings Linking Words
such
as human Linking Words
health
and environmental pollution.
On the one hand, one cannot deny that the extinction of Use synonyms
animals
is gradually Use synonyms
increased
due to deforestation and urbanization which may Wrong verb form
increasing
lends
to Change the verb form
lend
destroy
Wrong verb form
destroying
entire
Correct article usage
the entire
ecosytem
. To explain Correct your spelling
ecosystem
ecosystems
further
, every living Linking Words
beings
in Change to a singular noun
being
this
world is an inter-dependent, Linking Words
the
depreciation of any Correct word choice
and the
species
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imbalance
the ecosystem which leads to greater consequences. Correct your spelling
imbalanced
For example
, Linking Words
carvniorous
Correct your spelling
carnivorous
animals
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depends
on other Change the verb form
depend
animals
for their food the deprecation of some Use synonyms
animals
leads to feeding Use synonyms
issues
for them. Use synonyms
Besides
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balanced
Correct article usage
a balanced
ecosytem
, Correct your spelling
ecosystem
undoutedly
, every Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
individuals
is responsible to save Change to a singular noun
individual
species
from risk.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
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Although
saving some Correct word choice
apply
animals
from Use synonyms
the
extinction is required but might not be a priority when considering concerning Correct article usage
apply
issues
like Use synonyms
health
and environmental Use synonyms
issues
. Across the Use synonyms
globe
many citizens do not have an access to Add a comma
,globe
multifacility
hospitals. Correct your spelling
multi facility
multi-facility
For instance
, Linking Words
Many
South African Fix capitalization
many
countries
citizens Change noun form
country's
countries'
has
to cross their Change the verb form
have
nation
borders to get Replace the word
national
a
proper treatment, due to poverty, which cannot be possible for everyone. Remove the article
apply
In addition
to Linking Words
health
, authorities and organizations must spend their funds to reduce pollution by investing Use synonyms
on
environmental conservation which indirectly contributes to Change preposition
in
protect
and Wrong verb form
protecting
preserve
natural habitats.
Wrong verb form
preserving
Finally
, to recapitulate, the destruction of rare Linking Words
species
is Use synonyms
a
one of the major Change the article
apply
issues
to be addressed to keep Use synonyms
ecosystem
balanced and save them for Add an article
the ecosystem
Linking Words
next
generations. Correct article usage
the next
Nevertheless
, when compared to other major Linking Words
issues
, I strongly believe other major Use synonyms
issues
Use synonyms
such
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Use synonyms
health
and pollution take Change preposition
as health
a
topmost priority.Correct article usage
the
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