Your friend has written a letter to you asking for advice regarding a visit that his/her parents will be made to your area in the near future. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, recommend a place where they can stay suggest the places they can visit oﬀer to do something with them Write at least 150 words.

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Hello Saryu, Hope you and your family are doing well. Here, we all are

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fine. I have some exciting news for you, my

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are planning to visit Shimla in the coming week for their vocations. As we have never been to Shimla before, I would like to take a few suggestions from you as you have been living there since your childhood. The

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paramount thing I want to know is the best hotel near the visitors' area to stay for at least 4-5 days, which can provide breakfast as well. My

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decided to see the Durgiana Temple and the Royal View park. Could you please recommend some other worth seeing places to visit during their stay? As you were keen to meet my

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since we were studying together, so I think

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is the best chance to spend some leisure time with my

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. You can take them to dinner, as I know you have a very tight schedule. Please let me know if my

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need to carry any extra stuff with them as the weather is totally different in our region. My

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will see you soon. Best Wishes Sandy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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197 words

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