Your friend has written a letter to you asking for advice regarding a visit that his/her parents will be made to your area in the near future. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, recommend a place where they can stay suggest the places they can visit oﬀer to do something with them Write at least 150 words.

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Hello Saryu, Hope you and your family are doing well. Here, we all are

also

fine. I have some exciting news for you, my

parents

are planning to visit Shimla in the coming week for their vocations. As we have never been to Shimla before, I would like to take a few suggestions from you as you have been living there since your childhood. The

first

paramount thing I want to know is the best hotel near the visitors' area to stay for at least 4-5 days, which can provide breakfast as well. My

parents

decided to see the Durgiana Temple and the Royal View park. Could you please recommend some other worth seeing places to visit during their stay? As you were keen to meet my

parents

since we were studying together, so I think

this

is the best chance to spend some leisure time with my

parents

. You can take them to dinner, as I know you have a very tight schedule. Please let me know if my

parents

need to carry any extra stuff with them as the weather is totally different in our region. My

parents

will see you soon. Best Wishes Sandy

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