Many people lose their income due to CoVid19 pandemic. What solution that can do by government or individual to overcome this problem.

A large number of people are losing their
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and reducing their income during the
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pandemic. There are many reasons related to
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I am going to discuss some solutions to overcome
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problem in the following paragraphs. The first and most prominent one is that many companies encounter financial problems. During the
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situation, some
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are difficult to
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because a lot of goods and materials are imported from foreign countries. Indeed, the cost of the materials is double because the demand for
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is higher than the stock.
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, companies are changing to work from home
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a
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they did not provide the full salary. Despite the fact that there is less work to
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as they pay one-third of their
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salary. There are some solutions to tackle these issues. The government should reduce the tax
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their
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and
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status. Take Singapore as an example, if they have a family or children, they will
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to pay
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than single people.
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, the older person who is more than 80 years old
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will receive government incentives.
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, the authority provides loans with a lower interest rate for those communities that are self-employed to run and maintain their business. On
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, with
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regard
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individuals,
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can work online jobs like selling clothes, and homemade food so that they can earn extra pocket money to cover their expenses.
To sum up
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, many people not only lose their income but
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companies face financial problems.
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, the administration provides some tax reduction programs and loans to help
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citizens.
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, we cannot rely on the government's support
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we can find another income to overcome
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problem.

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structure
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grammar
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content
Use real and simple examples to show how money problems can be solved.
coherence
Make the link from problem to solution stronger in each idea.
content
Be careful with rules that are not true or likely, and keep ideas simple.
structure
Finish with a short, clear end that restates the main idea.
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You state the topic and give both government and person ideas.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial aid
  • Unemployment benefits
  • Job creation
  • Essential services
  • Small businesses
  • Tax relief
  • Retraining
  • Upskilling
  • Remote work
  • Digital infrastructure
  • Mental health
  • Stress management
  • Community support
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Self-employed
  • Pandemic
  • Income loss
  • Workforce
  • Subsidies
  • Telecommuting
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