Keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century.

These days people place a premium on

animals

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life and

independency

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. People argue that there is no need for

zoos

in the 21st century. In

this

essay

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I want to discuss, both advantages and disadvantages of

elimination

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of

zoos

. To advance a convincing theory I could deal with,

zoos

impact on studying. These places are good sources for studying

about

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different species. They can be used by both students and researchers.

In addition

to what I have just said, they are good places for endangered

animals

. Zookeepers can protect their eggs or babies

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form

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predators. On top of that, they don’t need to be worried

for

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food

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they will be

feed

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.

For instance

, Iranian tigers are in danger. So, zookeepers are in charge to protect their babies. There are only 2 tigers alive and only one baby.

Although

zoos

have had benefits, they

also

have had negative effects. When we change

animals

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habitat

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, they can’t live

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alone

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a lone

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in nature. On the grounds that they don’t know how to find food or even

scape

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from wild

animals

. Another feature which I could mention is, for some species

zoos

are not a comfortable place to live in.

for example

lions need a place to run in and drain their energy. On top of

that

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it is very

crule

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cruel

to keep

animals

in cages in case to entertain individuals. yet these days, safaris have been established. They are the wildlife that

are

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protected by

zookeeprs

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zookeepers

. To conclude, all in all,

number

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of

zoos

should be decreased by the 21st century. They must be used for important stuff not to entertain other people.