The earth is being filled with waste material such as plastic bags and other rubbish. Is this really happening? What are some solution to this problem?
Over the past few decades, increasing in the among of industrial
wastage
, household wastage
and plastic
bags
etc become a major concern. However
, these unpleasant toxic materials
not only affect human life but also
create bad
impact on wildlife. So In Add an article
a bad
this
essay, I will articulate the problems and relevant solutions in the forthcoming paragraph.
To initiate with, the plastic
bags
create various problems, the very first
and foremost is it affect the land
as well as the animal life. To elaborate , plastic
take
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takes
huge
time Correct article usage
a huge
for
dissolve Change preposition
to
in
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on
land
, Add an article
the land
,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
Add the comma(s)
,however
plastic
debris takes time around 500-1000 years of decomposing. Hence
, these materials
are going inside the land
and abate the fertility of the land
. Eventually, plastic
will affect the production of foods as it decreases the quality of the land
. Similarly
, the animals whose
consume these Correct pronoun usage
who
plastic
bags
or bottels
etc Correct your spelling
bottles
hence
, these materials
will stuck in their throat. Ultimately, by eating these type
of things they will die. So these Fix the agreement mistake
types
substance
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substances
are
affect Unnecessary verb
apply
land
and animals badly. As solution
, Add an article
a solution
government
should impose a law that every Add an article
the government
people
have to use
only jute bags
. However
, government
should surge up the production of Add an article
the government
clothe
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clothing
bags
and they will have to aware people
of benefits
of using cloths Correct article usage
the benefits
bags
, hence
people
draw to use
jute bags
. In addition
, government
should levy Add an article
the government
Correct article usage
a fine
fine
on Fix the agreement mistake
fines
public
Correct article usage
the public
whose
Correct pronoun usage
who
use
plastic
bags
.
Furthermore
problem which is Add a comma
,Furthermore
occured
by Correct your spelling
occurred
a
industrial Change the article
an
wastage
. The wastage
stuffs
of Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
industrial
Add an article
the industrial
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
mostly
thrown in Add a missing verb
is mostly
river
. To illustrate it, the chemical Add an article
the river
a river
materials
which are produce
at the end of the process are very toxic and harmful. Wrong verb form
produced
However
, if this
wastage
are
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is
leave
in the Wrong verb form
left
river
then
it affect
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affects
river
as well as marine creatures badly. These toxins made a layer on the top of the Correct article usage
the river
river
and if marine animals inhale these toxins then
they will die or caught
some issues. Wrong verb form
catch
Moreover
, rivers are badly damaged hence
people
are no
able to Correct your spelling
not
use
that water. In solution, before ,throw
a Wrong verb form
throwing
wastage
in river
company should firstly
purify that wastage
or made a saperate
area where they can launch their Correct your spelling
separate
wastage
. However
, government
should draw the company to follow Add an article
the government
rule
of RRR which is to reduce , reuse and recycle.
To recapitulate, as the earth is becoming more harm in these days, to settle these Add an article
the rule
concern
Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
government
should impose the
strict law against using destructive substances.Correct article usage
apply
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