A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your company. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/ her Explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #company #sort #work

Dear Zoe, I am writing

this

letter to you know a vacant job which is a junior post for the

fibre

planning department in my company and I think you might be fit

this

role.

First

and foremost, since

this

post is for

fibre

planning, job scopes

such

fibre

routing generating, and attending to site surveys will be involved.

Furthermore

, you may need to coordinate with customers and sub-contractors regarding

fibre

installation.

In addition

, reporting the daily work process of the orders to associate managers and other tasks assigned by managers will be involved.

Although

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apply

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there are a lot of responsibilities that you may need to do,

this

post is open for entry-level and seniors will give the training about the tasks.

Therefore

this

role is appropriate for you since you don’t have work experience and you can learn about not only the task but

also

onsite experience. I would like to suggest you apply directly from the company carrier website

instead

of applying from other employment agencies. I am looking forward to hearing good news from you and good luck. Warm Regards Sandar Myint

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8 paragraphs

186 words

8.00

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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