These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quit easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages and disadvantages of work from home?

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Working from
home
is easier for most
people
because of the availability of their own
computer
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and telephone. In my opinion, it has more advantages and disadvantages
becauseof
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because of
flexible
schedule
, and
fewer
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less
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transport, but it can
also
cause a drop in productivity and less chance of social interaction. The main
advantages
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advantage
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of
remote
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job
is
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the flexibility of the
schedule
. They can
schedule
their
work
time
around their
home
tasks
and
therefore
lead to better
work life
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work-life
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balance. Recent research on remote
jobs
during pandemics shows that the employer had better
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work -life
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work-life
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balance in remote
jobs
as compared to the working from
office
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the office
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.
In addition
to
this
,
remote
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job
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jobs
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also
helped to reduce commute
cost
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costs
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and
time
.
This
help
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helps
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them to be able to get more
work
done and save money from not having to commute to their workplace. Recent studies by BRTC in Bangladesh showed most employees who
work
from
home
saved about 10
percent
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per cent
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of their money more than the employee who
commute
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commutes
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to
office
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the office
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.
However
, remote
job
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jobs
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have come with it set of problems; the main
disadvantages
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disadvantage
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of remote
job
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jobs
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is
it
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they
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might cause a drop in productivity
in
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their
work
. For some, life at
home
become
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becomes
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distraction
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a distraction
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for
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their
tasks
at hand and
therefore
it
lead
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to
drop
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a drop
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in their attention to
ther
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their
other
the
tasks
.
For example
, there was a viral video of a news
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Spokesperson
who
were
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reporting news from his
roomand
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room and
his kids
burged
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barged
burned
bulged
into his space and
asking
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for his attention. The spokesperson had to take
bit
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of
time
to take his kids out of the room and continued his reporting duties.
Beside
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this
, remote
job
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jobs
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take away the opportunity to network with
people
around them. Networking with
people
can be an
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to a better opportunity but remote
job
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jobs
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take away that chance. Recent studies
shows
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how many
people
are struggling to find
jobs
around them as they have no one to ask for around due to their lack of social skill. In conclusion, there is
rise
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the rise
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of
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in
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remote
jobs
nowaday
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nowadays
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because they can plan their
schedule
more effectively around their
home
tasks
and save money and
time
from commuting
tot heir
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to their
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workplace
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work place
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workplace
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.
However
remote
job
can affect their
work
productivity and social interaction.
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