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These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quit easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages and disadvantages of work from home?

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Working from
home
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 is easier for most
people
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 because of the availability of their own
computer
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computers
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 and telephone. In my opinion, it has more advantages and disadvantages
becauseof
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because of
 flexible
schedule
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, and
fewer
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less
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 transport, but it can
also
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 cause a drop in productivity and less chance of social interaction. The main
advantages
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advantage
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 of
remote
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a remote
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job
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is
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are
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 the flexibility of the
schedule
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. They can
schedule
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 their
work
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time
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 around their
home
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tasks
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 and
therefore
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 lead to better
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work life
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work-life
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 balance. Recent research on remote
jobs
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 during pandemics shows that the employer had better
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work-life
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work -life
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work-life
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 balance in remote
jobs
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 as compared to the working from
office
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the office
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.
In addition
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 to
this
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,
remote
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the remote
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job
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jobs
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also
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 helped to reduce commute
cost
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costs
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 and
time
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.
This
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help
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helps
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 them to be able to get more
work
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 done and save money from not having to commute to their workplace. Recent studies by BRTC in Bangladesh showed most employees who
work
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 from
home
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 saved about 10
percent
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per cent
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 of their money more than the employee who
commute
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commutes
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 to
office
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the office
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.
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, remote
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job
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jobs
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 have come with it set of problems; the main
disadvantages
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disadvantage
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 of remote
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job
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jobs
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 is
it
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they
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 might cause a drop in productivity
in
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apply
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their
work
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. For some, life at
home
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become
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becomes
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distraction
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a distraction
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for
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from
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 their
tasks
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 at hand and
therefore
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 it
lead
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leads
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 to
drop
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a drop
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 in their attention to
ther
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their
other
the
tasks
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.
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, there was a viral video of a news
Spokeperson
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Spokesperson
 who
were
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 reporting news from his
roomand
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room and
 his kids
burged
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barged
burned
bulged
 into his space and
asking
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asked
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 for his attention. The spokesperson had to take
bit
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a bit
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 of
time
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 to take his kids out of the room and continued his reporting duties.
Beside
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this
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, remote
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job
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jobs
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 take away the opportunity to network with
people
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 around them. Networking with
people
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 can be an
assets
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 to a better opportunity but remote
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job
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jobs
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 take away that chance. Recent studies
shows
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show
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 how many
people
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 are struggling to find
jobs
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 around them as they have no one to ask for around due to their lack of social skill. In conclusion, there is
rise
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the rise
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of
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in
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 remote
jobs
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nowaday
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nowadays
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 because they can plan their
schedule
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 more effectively around their
home
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tasks
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 and save money and
time
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 from commuting
tot heir
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to their
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workplace
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work place
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workplace
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.
However
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 remote
job
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 can affect their
work
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 productivity and social interaction.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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