With increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform . what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

In the modern
world
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problem requires
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modern
solution. As the innovative techniques are taking down human resource
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shortage
shortages
issue are
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appreciable
.
Moreover
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it can bring
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demerits
to few
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of
people
and merits for most of the population.
First
and foremost, no use of technology would bring
world
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to the old age, where
people
used to do
repetative
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repetitive
task
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as they did not have any other option. Nowadays not only
machines
are
effeciently
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efficiently
doing the
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repetitive
reparative
task with less human intervention but
also
leaving an opportunity for humans to focus on
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level of
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. Especially,
aggriculture
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agriculture
and farming methods are improved due to
advancement
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in tools used by farmers to grow and cultivate
thier
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their
crops.
For instance
, drones helping in irrigation and monitoring of crops would be a huge
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relief
for farmers.
Secondly
, it is creating an
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unemployment
employment
scenario for
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segments.
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the
machines
are working
effeciently
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efficiently
without making any
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errors
error
, resulting in
layoff
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the layoff
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of
people
who
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not have any particular skill to survive.
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, if heavy goods can be taken by
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automated
machines
from one place to
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in
warehouse
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a warehouse
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, why would
company
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hire any labour to do so. The biggest example today is Amazon, they have robots who shuffle and sort their delivery packages. In conclusion,
machines
will get more innovative in
future
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people
need to put hand in hand with technology by enhancing their skills, because
machines
can not build new
machines
but
human
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brain can do build anything.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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