With increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform . what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
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and foremost, no use of technology would bring world
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people
used to do repetative
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task
as they did not have any other option. Nowadays not only Fix the agreement mistake
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machines
are effeciently
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advancements
thier
crops. Correct your spelling
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For instance
, drones helping in irrigation and monitoring of crops would be a huge releif
for farmers.
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relief
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unemployment
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machines
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other places
warehouse
, why would Add an article
a warehouse
the warehouse
company
hire any labour to do so. The biggest example today is Amazon, they have robots who shuffle and sort their delivery packages.
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machines
will get more innovative in future
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the future
people
need to put hand in hand with technology by enhancing their skills, because machines
can not build new machines
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...