Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The diagram provides information on the production of
honey
by bees. Overall, the process consists of seven stages, starting with manufacturing and construction of the hive and ending with getting the ready
honey
. The
first
stage of the production is to build a hive
that is
constituted of small polygon figures. As soon as
this
work is accomplished bees start to seek flowers, which will supply them with a necessary component of
honey
, nectar. To extract
this
substance the insect sits on the flower and takes the small pieces of nectar with its limbs. After that, the insect returns to the hive to fill the empty cells. Once all cells are filled with nectar, the bee sits on them and starts motion with its wings.
This
movement creates an intensive circulation of air.
Then
the filled cells experience heat, it evaporates the water contained in the substance.
Finally
, the hives are full of
honey
and can be consumed, while sometimes the
honey
is extracted and poured out into jars.
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