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Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing.To what extent do you agree? Write at least 250 words.

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The diagram demonstrates how plastic
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 are recycled to produce various products. Overall, it is a cyclical process which comprises nine steps, beginning with collecting
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 from garbage bins and ending with the manufacturing of finished products. The process starts with the accumulation of dumped
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 from bins with the help of a garbage truck. All the material collected in the truck is
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 taken to a recycling centre where all the waste
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 are sorted and kept in a gigantic container.
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,
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 non-recyclable material is compressed into blocks and put in a crusher machine containing two circular rollers. The residue we get after crushing is washed in an open tank filled with water. After washing, the leftover material is put in a machine to produce plastic pellets. These pellets are
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 heated to form raw material. The eighth step consists of packing
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raw material which is
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 transported to different factories to produce their end products.
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, factories can either use it to make plastic
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 and containers or can manufacture clothes, reusable shopping bags and stationary objects which can again be used for recycling.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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