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Some people think that music lessons aren’t important and that children should pay more attention to science. Do you agree or disagree?

There are a lot of people believing that kids should focus on
science
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 classes
instead
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 of musical ones because they are less crucial. From my point of view, I completely disagree with
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 statement and , I will support my view with examples.
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 of all, learning
music
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 has many benefits for students, especially, young
children
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. Singing and dancing with classmates make kids feel happy and relaxed after hard-studying time.
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, it is easy to see many grinning faces in
music
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 class in both primary and secondary schools.
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, learning art is beneficial for the brain's development. Many scientists show that students, who can sing a song or play instruments beautifully, are more creative and able to communicate better than others.
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,
instead
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 of focusing on math, and
science
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,
children
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 should learn various subjects and spend more time on their favourite ones. We all know that people have different strengths and weaknesses and it will be more effective if they can develop based on their foundations. By learning all different subjects,
children
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 can figure out which classes or fields that are suitable for them.
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, if a kid is good at solving quizzes and questions, math, physic or
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 can be good choices.
On the other hand
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, if a child has some talents in composing and singing, we should let that kid follow more art classes. To sum up, I believe that
music
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 brings so many advantages for young
children
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 to grow up completely. And,
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, students should focus on any subjects that they are interested in, like
science
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,
music
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 or any others.

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