Some people think that music lessons aren’t important and that children should pay more attention to science. Do you agree or disagree?

There are a lot of people believing that kids should focus on

science

classes

instead

of musical ones because they are less crucial. From my point of view, I completely disagree with

this

statement and , I will support my view with examples.

First

of all, learning

music

has many benefits for students, especially, young

children

. Singing and dancing with classmates make kids feel happy and relaxed after hard-studying time.

For instance

, it is easy to see many grinning faces in

music

class in both primary and secondary schools.

Moreover

, learning art is beneficial for the brain's development. Many scientists show that students, who can sing a song or play instruments beautifully, are more creative and able to communicate better than others.

Second

,

instead

of focusing on math, and

science

,

children

should learn various subjects and spend more time on their favourite ones. We all know that people have different strengths and weaknesses and it will be more effective if they can develop based on their foundations. By learning all different subjects,

children

can figure out which classes or fields that are suitable for them.

For example

, if a kid is good at solving quizzes and questions, math, physic or

science

can be good choices.

On the other hand

, if a child has some talents in composing and singing, we should let that kid follow more art classes. To sum up, I believe that

music

brings so many advantages for young

children

to grow up completely. And,

also

, students should focus on any subjects that they are interested in, like

science

,

music

or any others.